Walking over to Castel rock we were very scared we didn't know what the hunters or fully capable of. We really did not want to know what they might do us if they didn't want us at Castle rock because, that was their territory and not ours. As we approached this small area to pass from the island to Castel rock we got even more scared and we clenched onto each other's arms. The first hunter that we saw was Robert. Small rocks came flying at us from above, we thought that we were going to be hit and get hurt. We looked up and saw who was throwing the rocks it was Roger but, he missed every time as if he was purposely not trying to hit us it was probably because, he still had a little bit of good and enough to keep him from hurting us and doing other people are but at the same time he wanted to go with the flow and followed Jack. Piggy walked up to Jack stumbling along the way because he did not have his glasses.
"Give me back my glasses" said Piggy.
"why" said Jack.
"Because it's the right thing to do" said Piggy.
"What kind of in the answer is that" said Jack.
"The best answer and answer I just gave you" said Piggy.
Up the cliff that piggy was standing under was the rest of the hunters there was a big Boulder rock next to them. They were prying it up with a stick, finally they got it out of its place and it fell right on top of piggy. we were both scared to our bones . Piggies body flew into the ocean about 40 feet away, he landed on a big rock the water all around him turned red and bloody his brains slipped out of his head. we wanted to throw up but, at the same time cry becaus the devastation of piggy death.
"Sam and Eric you're coming with us" said Jack.
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Jake-
Even though it was kind of gross, I like how you included details about Piggy's death. But again, make sure to check your grammar and spelling because I saw a few mistakes. Good Job
Jake-
I really like how you have constant opinions on what's happening in the story, something we don't see in the book. You did have some misspellings and run on sentences. You might want to seperate the first sentence with a semi colon or a period because it talkes about two different thoughts.
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