Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Blog 8
Coming out of the bushes I saw the pig's head on a spear, I could not believe the corruption amongst all of these boys especially the hunters watching. As the blood trickled from the pig's head, it made me want to throw up. I cannot believe how steadfast Jack is with hunting, that's all he cares about. He does not even care about the life of animals or the well-being of others, if somebody asked me the beast is Jack he is the corruption in the group of boys he is the one that makes us do bad things. I can't stand this anymore I turn around and start running up that Hill. Running through the green tall grasses with branches scraping my legs along the way. When I got close to the top of the mountain I saw a big billowing parachutes hanging from trees I was very intrigued so I went to take a closer look at it and there is a dead body hanging from underneath of the billowing parachute. I was tremouls because, I realize that their beast was the dead parachuter.
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2 comments:
Jake-
I really like your wide us of vocabulary. Good Job! But it didn't really cover all of the topics required in this blog. I would suggest adding more about Simon's encounter with the lord of the flies and when he discovers that there is no beast.
Jake-
I really like how fast this blog moves, it feels like we really are Simon rushing up the hill. But, I would love to hear more about his death! You might also want to check your spelling of "tremulous" and look for where you can add more periods. Excellent work!
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